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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly •Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours •Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the garbage and rubbish collection that does not work sufficiently in my residential area, I would like to let you know about
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 issue that I and all my neighbours suffer about
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 problem. First of all , the garbage collection truck is not adequate enough to collect,
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, the
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 collection takes place odds day and the council is not collecting the
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 in a segregated manner. the issues are directed to a lot of society,health problems and the environment. Unfortunately,it causes unavoidable diseases because when the
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 is collected in one place
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 area becomes a large landfill which is why toxins spread into the atmosphere.
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,it affects all inhabitants of my neighbourhood negatively. I would like to suggest you inform the
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 companies to collect rubbish regularly and take fast steps to prevent
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 kind of action.
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,collecting
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 five times a week would destroy our concerns. I looking for heard best answer from you , Best regards, Pardis Ghobadi

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coherence cohesion
Consider clearly structuring each paragraph with a single main idea to enhance coherence. This will make it easier for the reader to follow your arguments and solutions.
task achievement
Be sure to expand more on each point to thoroughly address the task requirements, such as giving more specific examples or suggestions.
coherence cohesion
Keep sentences short and concise to maintain clarity and coherence.
coherence cohesion
The letter contains the necessary elements, such as a greeting and closing, which provides a complete structure for the communication.
task achievement
The tone used in the letter is formal and appropriate for addressing a local council.
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Your explanation of the problem is clear and establishes the urgency of the issue.
Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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