You study at a university and often use the university library. The library closes very early in the evening and you are not able to stay there and study. Write a letter to the Manager of the library. In the letter, Describe who you are and the details of your university course Explain the problem at the library Suggest what you think the Manager should do

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Hello MR Osama . I am Mohammed studying accounting ,
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, I need to go to the
library
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every day to study and
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read books which are related to my major ,
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, There are some problems there ,
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the
library
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closes earlier than any
library
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in the city . If we finished classes , we would have one hour in the
library
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and
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close . You know only students who come
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there .
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, I heard from some employees we close at 4:00 PM because We don't have enough employees , In my opinion, that isn't a real reason to close ,
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, I suggest employing more than now, If you don't have enough money you can get volunteer , I know a lot of people excited to be a volunteer there . Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you . regards Mohammed
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each sentence logically connects to the next to improve the logical structure.
task achievement
Revise sentences to ensure formal tone, such as replacing 'you know' with a more formal expression.
coherence cohesion
Includes a proper greeting and closing.
task achievement
Addresses all parts of the task effectively.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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