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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides key information about the
number
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 of enquiries that have been received via various methods by the Tourist info office in a city for over a six-month period in 2011. The units are measured in numbers.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the in-person and
the
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apply
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telephone
questions
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 experienced
a
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apply
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constant growth during
all
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apply
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the
six-month
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six months
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.
Whereas
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, the letters and emails enquiries have plunged after March.
According to
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 the data shown, over 800
questions
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 were received via telephone in January; but it declined slightly to 800
questions
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 in February, after that the
number
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 of the
questions
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 continued to increase to 1600 by June. The in-person inquiries started with the lowest figure in the chart, which was less than 600 in January, but it reached the peak in June with approximately 1900 visits, which was
the
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a
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 significant
number
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 among all other categories. In terms of the
number
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 of electronic emails and letter inquiries, it is obvious that after March the numbers decreased till
it
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they
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 reached 390 in May, and remained steady until the end of the interval.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, questions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • number of inquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • six-month period
  • increased steadily
  • reached a peak
  • decreased slightly
  • increased dramatically
  • experienced a gradual decline
  • general trend
  • highest number
  • lowest number
  • significant increase
  • tourism interest
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