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IELTS 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel

IELTS 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel
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The presented table represents the commuting modes utilized for travelling and their average distance from 1985 to 2000 in England. In general, it is conspicuous that in the all observed period, the most popular transportation was
car
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a car
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,
however
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, both
taxi
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taxis
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 and
bicycle
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bicycles
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 were at the top two lowest. Turning to the most significant method, in England more than
a
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apply
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half
population
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the population
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 of travellers selected
car
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a car
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 in 1985 and 2000.
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,
local
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the local
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 bus was the
secod
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second
 highest category
choosen
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chosen
 in 1985 before
replaced
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 by train in the following period.
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, walking contributed the same number in all periods by around 200 persons.
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,
taxi
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taxis
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 and
bicycle
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bicycles
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 provided
the
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 low number of reports at just beneath 50 individuals choosing them.
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,
tthe
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the
 long distance bus
also
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 provided only 54 people before increasing to 124
in
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 the end of the reported period.
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, local
bus
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buses
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 experienced different
change
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changes
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 because
it
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they
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 plummeted
at
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by
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 almost 50% compared to the first surveyed year.
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