The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart compares data about the number of people per million following the 5 various famous influencers on Instagram at two points in time namely, 2018 and 2021.
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, it was important that the figure of celebrities' admiration increased over the period of 3 years.
According to
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the diagram, Selena Gomez, who had the most famous account in 2018, hit nearly 125 in the beginning;
then
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it climbed moderately to just under 250, the
last
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one in 2021. Cristian Ronaldo and Ariana Grande reached roughly the same number at just over 100 in 2018;
thereafter
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, Ronaldo leapt overwhelmingly to the first level in 2021 at almost 320.
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, Grande grew significantly to 250 in 2021. The graph demonstrates that Kylie Jenner and The Rock respectively recorded 100 and approximately 90 at the start, after that, they rose considerably to nearly the same score as Ariana ground in 2021.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • popularity
  • Instagram accounts
  • growth
  • decline
  • comparison
  • remained stable
  • significant change
  • new entries
  • exits
  • patterns
  • trends
  • noteworthy
  • notable
  • fluctuation
  • predominant
  • dominant
  • proliferation
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