The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides information about visitors across the country to the coast, the mountains, and the lakes in a European region in the
year
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between 1987 and 2007. The numbers are measured by thousands.
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, the coastal area is the
most
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place to visit from the beginning until the end of the period. Meanwhile, the mountains are the least
visitors
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from
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other countries. Looking closely, from the beginning of the year it was obvious that the coast was the most hectic and crowded area compared to other areas in Europe, it was 40
thousand
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in 1987
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fell by 5
thousand
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in 1992
then
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, sharply grew until hit to the peek above 70
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visitant. The lake was the
least
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guest at the beginning but it dramatically increased to under 80
thousand
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in 2002,
however
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, it experienced a rapid decrease to 50
thousand
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visitors in 2007. The mountain area had substantial foreigners, the caller experienced a slight increase from 20
thousand
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to under 40
thousand
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at the end
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of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuations
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • popular destination
  • significant changes
  • peak
  • trough
  • speculate
  • geopolitical events
  • attractiveness
  • positive outlook
  • challenges
  • tourism industry
  • overseas visitors
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