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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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INTRODUCTION: when modern
communication
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 introduced,
people
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 may no longer write letters."yes its true" Its very much easier to communicate in phone rather in letter.so modern
communication
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 is more helpful for all the generation. AGREE TO MODERN
COMMUNICATION
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:
People
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 are used to latest technology, and latest updates,(
eg
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 mobile phones and laptop) every year there are updated versions are launched in the market.Everyone try to upgrade them self with latest technology,which has fastes
communication
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 (
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: watsapp ,facebook, instagram) we can make video call from any part of the world to our friends and relatives.we can chat for hours more over we can text messages. USAGE:
This
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 resource is more usefull for blind
people
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 other physically challenged
people
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, because they need not write letters to their family or friends,rather use these
communication
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 which would be helpul and usefull for them.It had google voice so they can find the location to the destination they have to reach with out the help of any human (
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 when a peson is met with an accident, we can immediately call an ambulance rather waiting for a vehical to come) CAUSIS: More use of laptops and other gadgets may cause addiction to human and childern.(
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 childern often watching phones can cause autism) These should only serve their puropse rather misused by fraud and criminals. CONCLUSION: Any
communication
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 should be used for a good purpose and
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 useful for the public.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your essay follows a clear and logical structure. Consider starting each paragraph with a topic sentence that introduces the main point of that paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Develop each paragraph with a single, focused idea related to your main argument. Avoid mixing several ideas in one paragraph.
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Beware of using conversational expressions like 'yes its true.' Stick to a neutral tone throughout academic writing.
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Support your arguments with relevant examples and details. This can strengthen your position and clarity in responses.
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Use punctuation such as commas and full stops appropriately to ensure clarity and readability.
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You've provided examples of modern communication tools like WhatsApp, Facebook, and Instagram, which effectively illustrates your point.
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Including the benefits for blind and physically challenged people shows an understanding of how modern communication can aid different groups.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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