The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of US households and their yearly
income
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in three distinct years 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it is evident that approximately 30
million
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families
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had the highest yearly average
of
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income
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at $100,000 or more,
while
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15
million
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families
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in the nine years of study reported an annual
income
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of $75,000-$999,999. In 2007, 30
million
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families
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declared their annual
income
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to
$
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100,000 or more,
while
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25
million
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received less than $25,000 wages.
In contrast
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, the number of households earning $25,00-$49,999 had slightly increased to 30
million
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in 2011 from 27
million
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in 2007. Looking more at the data, the number of
families
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with an annual salary of $100,000 or more peaked
to
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at
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33
million
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in 2015,
while
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households with an average of $50,000-$74,000 gross pay
remain
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unchanged for the
last
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nine years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, million, families with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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