The bar chart gives information about sales in three years 2011 2012 2013.

The bar chart gives information about sales in three years 2011 2012 2013.
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The bar chart illustrates the
sales
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figures for Apple and Samsung over three years: 2011, 2012, and 2013.
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while
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in 2012 both companies experienced their lowest level of
sales
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.
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However
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in 2013 their
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increased respectively and reached
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the highest point. Apple’s
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showed significant fluctuations during the period. In 2011, the company recorded
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of 50
million
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, which
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dropped sharply to 20
million
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in 2012.
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, by 2013, Apple’s
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recovered dramatically, reaching a peak of 70
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, the highest figure recorded across the three years. Samsung’s
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,
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, exhibited steady growth. The company began with 35
million
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units sold in both 2011 and 2012. By 2013, Samsung experienced a substantial increase, with
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rising to 60
million
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units.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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