The table shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.

The table shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
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The table compares the five highest rankings in terms of the number of visits and the money spent by
tourists
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during a specific period of time (2012-2013).
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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France is the most popular destination among
tourists
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in both given years, followed by the
USA
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.
However
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, the
USA
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earned the most revenue from
tourists
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in both 2012 and 2013.
According to
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the data, in 2012 83
million
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visited France,
while
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the
USA
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took second place with 66.7
million
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. Both Spain and China accounted the equal quantities with approximately 58
million
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.
However
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, Italy had the lowest number of
tourists
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with 46,4
million
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. In 2013 the number of
tourists
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experienced a slight rise of between 1 and 4
million
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in each country, with the exception of China.
In contrast
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, the situation was significantly disparate in earning
tourists
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’ revenue. By taking a closer look at the data we can observe that spending by
tourists
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visiting the
USA
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increased from $126.2 billion in 2012 to $139.6 billion in 2013.
Whereas
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, Spain is in second place with growth in spending from 56
million
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to 60
million
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, followed by France, China and Italy. Interestingly, despite falling numbers of
tourists
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, Chinese revenue from tourism climbed by $1.7 billion in 2013.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, usa, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourist arrivals
  • influx of tourists
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • infrastructure development
  • revenue generation
  • geographical distribution
  • popular destination
  • regional analysis
  • natural attractions
  • cultural heritage
  • seasonal trends
  • tourism patterns
  • climatic conditions
  • tourism preferences
  • adventure tourism
  • eco-tourism
  • cultural tourism
  • holiday seasons
  • local events
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