Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher. Following his advice, you need to write a letter to the teacher and say: •What is your motivation to learn a new language •How can the teacher help you •When you will be ready to start

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Hello Mr. Jhon My name is Vairag Patel, I am an immigrant student in Canada, currently studying at Herzing College and pursuing a programmer Analyst degree certificate. One of my seniors suggested I achieve proficiency in the French language and it will provide multiple career development opportunities.
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, my most underlying reason for learning
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accent, is that I live in a speaking province, where the maximum population are French speakers, my first goal is to learn
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terminology which help me to explore their culture, tradition and
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, I will be able to have a conversation with people and build social connection and friendship.
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, I am not familiar with
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accent, I would like you to provide me a in-depth knowledge about
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expression and suggest some helpful materials. I would like to join
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class as soon as possible, I am completely available during the weekends, we could start
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Saturday. I look forward to your response at your convenience. Yours Sincerely, Vairag

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General
Consider expanding more on how the teacher can help you specifically with learning the French language.
Coherence and Cohesion
Break down long paragraphs into smaller sections to maintain a clearer structure.
Task Achievement
Ensure every suggestion or request to the teacher directly corresponds to your motivation or learning goals.
Task Achievement
The introduction clearly mentions who you are and your motivation for learning French.
Suitable Writing Tone
The letter has a polite and respectful tone throughout.
Logical Structure
The overall structure is logical, starting with motivation and moving towards availability.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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