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Sociologists opine that social networking websites can have a negative impact on society as they can be used to spread false information. Do you agree or disagree

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, news is on the rise, they are spread all over the
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, there are
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 bad sides to websites
people
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 believe what they read on the platforms and actualize it.
World
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 news spreads all over the
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 every minute on different social platforms. Some
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 including me believe, that it is useful for us in various ways
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 others are against it, and I will discuss both sides.
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, incoming information from different sources of the internet is on the rise
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, society can search for whatever information they need most. Whatever it will be, it could be medical, technology, or knowledge which is beneficial for humanity
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, the more you know the more you become intelligent. Literally,
people
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 become aware of everything with the help of the news.
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, the widespread of technology means that we will receive more false media every day and untrue media will be uploaded
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, there are
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 bad sides of websites
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,
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 believe what they read on the platforms and actualize it. It would be great if the government took control or at least banned untrue texts.
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, I assume the wrong media should be restricted or need to put a warning to the below. Nowadays the spread of networks is increasing every day, if the government takes control of that it would be involved in a good way which, will be useful for humans, I hope it will be good and I think so.
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that your ideas are presented logically with clear transitions between paragraphs and sentences.
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Coherence & Cohesion
You have a clear introduction and conclusion, which frame your argument.
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You recognize both sides of the argument, which is essential for a balanced discussion.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Misinformation
  • Proliferation
  • Skew public opinion
  • Fact-checking
  • Authenticity
  • Misleading information
  • Regulation
  • Accountability
  • Media literacy
  • User discernment
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