A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Khushi,
Hopefully, I believe everything is going well with you. Blessed to talk with you after ages. I looked at posts about your
trip
planning Use synonyms
this
summer on Instagram.
I am personally happy to see you exploring places as I know you are Linking Words
such
an introverted person. I was shocked looking at your camping post in Manali, India. Linking Words
This
decision would be so amazing, thrilling and adventurous for you. Linking Words
This
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trip
will Use synonyms
also
let you know about different spots. Linking Words
However
, it would exhaust you Linking Words
at the end
of the day Linking Words
due to
lots of activities.
In my experience, I would like to suggest some notable points regarding Linking Words
this
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trip
to avoid some cons . Use synonyms
Firstly
, try not to carry so many unwanted things in a bag during tracking . Make sure you bring all the necessary things Linking Words
such
as first aid, food and water. Linking Words
Secondly
, please carry durable shoes that can help you from legaches. Linking Words
Last
but not least, don't forget your jacket Linking Words
during
camping as it Change preposition
while
would
be cold .
I hope you referring Wrong verb form
will
this
message will give you numerous answers to your questions. Linking Words
Also
, I was wondering about joining Linking Words
such
a thrilling Linking Words
trip
with you but Use synonyms
due to
workload, I won't be able to join up.
Best of wishes & take care,
Drashti ChotaliyaLinking Words
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity and flow.
task achievement
Try to include more details or personal anecdotes to strengthen your task response.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and concludes with a friendly tone, creating a clear structure.
task achievement
You provided practical advice and shared your personal experience, making the response engaging and informative.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite