"You are planning to visit a friend who lives in another city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you want to visit tell them when you plan to come ask them for suggestions on what to do during your visit."**

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Dear Sam, I hope

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email letter finds you in great health. I have some exciting news that I am planning to come to visit your Toronto city, and I need some guidance from you.

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, my main purpose of

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visit is to explore the city for new career opportunities.

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, I would like to see the neighbourhoods and facilities of

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vibrant place.

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, a long weekend is approaching after two weeks, so

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will be the perfect time for my tour. As, there will be no need to take leave from the office during

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we both can save some money.

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, I heard a lot of things about the Toronto Public Library, and I am eagerly waiting for a long time to watch

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, I am seeking some advice from you about some particular activities that we can do during my stay. I am looking forward to your prompt response. Yours truly, Priyanka

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coherence cohesion

Improve the logical flow by clearly separating the reasoning for the visit and the request for activity suggestions.

task achievement

Provide a more specific schedule or date for the visit to fully achieve the task.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a friendly and polite tone suitable for writing to a friend.

complete response

Includes a clear purpose for the visit and requests for suggestions, fulfilling the task requirements.

greeting and closing

Effective greeting and closing that are appropriate for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

160 words

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"You are planning to visit a friend who lives in another city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you want to visit tell them when you plan to come ask them for suggestions on what to do during your visit."**

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The best way to reduce poverty is to provide at least 6 years of free education for all children to learn to listen,read and count the number.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and government should stop spending large amount of money on their armed forces . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

To what extent has the internet made life more convinient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.