The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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The chart illustrates how many citizens of three different ages (young age, adults, and elderly) in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and future predictions for 2050.

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, the most

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in 2020 were young

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in 2000 and predicted adult

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will dominate in 2050 in Yamen,

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the majority of citizens will be adults in 2000 and 2050 in Italy. Half of the population in Yemen is younger

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(0-14

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) around 50,1% meanwhile the proportion of the population of 0-14

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old decreased in 2050 to around 37,0%.

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, the number of adults aged increased from 46,2% in 2000 to 57,3% in 2050.

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the proportion of elderly had little growth from 3,6% in 2000 to 5,7% in the future.

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, the most of citizens in Italy by 15-59

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around 61,6% in 2000 but the predictions in 2050 decreased around 46,2%. Meanwhile,

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more than 60

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increased from 24,1% in 2000 to 42,3% in 2050.

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, the number of the young population decreased from 14,3% % to 11,5% in projections for 2050

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

age demographics
age structure
population distribution
youthful population
ageing population
life expectancy
birth rate
demographic shift
population projection
median age
dependents
working-age population
elderly dependents
geriatric
fertility rate
migration
demographic trends
baby boomers
demographic dividend
population pyramid

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The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

interest in homeschooling is becoming more widespread around the world. in your opinion, should school be compulsory for all children, or should families be allowed the right to choose to educate their children at home?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

More and more people are shifting to a plant-based diet. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

‏Higher education could be funded in three ways. all costs paid by government, all costs paid by students or student paying all costs through a government loan. what are the advantages of these choices?

advertising has become increasingly popular in different markets. The firms are using various forms of adverts to popularize the novelty of their products to the public in order to make additional profit.