Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
As the human rights issue has arisen in the
last
century, people are arguing about the freedom to choose their way of life. This
includes the amount of noise
they sound
. Some people say this
should be controlled, while
others argue this
. For some reason, I stand with the idea of giving some limitations to performing a loud noise
.
To begin
with, the main reason to control the volume level is to have comfortable surroundings. Albeit giving human rights, performing a high noise
is also
disturbing others' right to have comfortable surroundings at the same time. With a high-frequency sound
in their surrounding, they might not be able to do their activity. As an illustration, if a concert is held near a school at the school time then
the students might not be able to study at the school.
In another perspective, strictly controlling the level of noise
may cause problems for some activities, such
as in aviation and festivals. It is impossible for some companies to decrease the noise
. For example
, making a loud sound
when a plane is taking off or landing is inevitable. Thus
, the companies may spend higher expenditures in order to adapt to such
a rule.
As an alternative to measure this
problem, there are some limitations that can be implemented by the government. The first limitation is by ruling the companies to make noise
in a certain area. For example
, airports should be in a suburban with a large empty area and should not be near residential areas. Secondly
, events that possibly cause a loud noise
should be banned during a certain time. For example
, outdoor parties should not be held after 10pm in order to have a peaceful neighbourhood.
In summary, despite giving people the freedom to act, making a loud sound
should be limited. On one hand, this
is inevitable to cause a high volume in some fields. On the other hand
, it may disturb others' comfort. Thus
, some limitations are needed to give a peaceful life for both parties.Submitted by serlyayus on
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