The diagram below shows how the AUstralian Bureau of Meterology collects up-to-the-minute-information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the AUstralian Bureau of Meterology collects up-to-the-minute-information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The Australian Bureau of Meteorology reports trustworthy weather forecasts with up-to-the-minute
information
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. The diagram shows the procedure
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how these
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are collected, analyzed, and prepared with the end product of reports that we see in different devices. The process begins with the collection of
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. There are three sources of
information
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. First are the satellites which provide raw images like satellite photos.
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are the drifting buoys that need additional
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from radars to produce synoptic charts.
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, radars house all the
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from both satellites and synoptic charts creating a radar screen. The next step involves analysis and forecasting. The
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collected from the satellite photos, synoptic charts and radar
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are the ground zero of thorough analysis and investigation to know the present and predict the upcoming climate. All these databases are stored in the computer where the broadcast is prepared. In the final steps, the computers are where meteorologists summarize the countless amounts of
data
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gathered and finalize a weather report. The same computers distribute the timebound weather forecasts to different consumer devices may it be through their
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TV newsreader
, radio or a recorded announcement.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, data with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
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