There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Several individuals believe that the most crucial invention is the internet. I firmly agree with

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me, even though there have been a variety of inventions, technological advancement was a turning point for humanity. It did not only allow

people

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to use it for personal needs, but it

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laid the foundation

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other developments

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as artificial intelligence. The digital realm has a wide range of benefits. At

first,

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it was used

for

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mostly for basic needs

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such as

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online surfing, watching movies or videos, online shopping, etc.

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, nowadays, its reliance is beyond our imagination.

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, there are online networking

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platforms

, web-based applications and more.

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also

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advantagous

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advantageous

in educational settings. To

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elaborate

, during a

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pandemic, it was the only option for instructors to

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communicate

with pupils. Later on, even after

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people

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started to use it since it helped in several aspects in the manner of time management and provided equal success with less effort.

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, it enhanced from being a

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system to

interactive

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system. In

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world,

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its common reliance, it can

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interact with

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via machine learning algorithms.

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, in the past,

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used to

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about topics related

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their projects.

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, rather than asking for a subject, thanks to its intelligence, it can even do the projects in only

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seconds.

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then

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people

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can give feedback and it can change the answers

accordingly

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, its technological breakthroughs are developing day by day. In conclusion, every innovation is pivotal and

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affects

affect

humanity positively.

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internet

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the internet

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has become a vital part of our everyday life and its existence cannot be underestimated.

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Try to develop your arguments further by elaborating on your points with more detailed examples.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that your paragraphs have clear topic sentences that relate directly to your thesis statement.

coherence and cohesion

Watch out for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which may distract from your main points.

task achievement

The essay presents a clear opinion on the topic and maintains a consistent viewpoint throughout.

task achievement

You effectively used examples to illustrate your points, particularly in discussing the role of the internet in education during the pandemic.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

281 words

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