The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources os fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources os fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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These charts give us information about the sources of fish imported and their value. All
this
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in the US between 1988 and 2000.
Overall
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, the value of the import of water animals had increased between the years given and the sources had changed notably. Canada lost importance
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China and others gained some. In 1988, the American country spent 6.57
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of
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Dollars because of
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. It continued rising through the years, in fact, in 1992 the spending was 8.52
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and in 2000 it reached 10.72, a number
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undoubtedly very high. That
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a raise of almost 160%. In these three pie charts, we can see that the
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to the US used to lead the proportion of fish imported with 60%,
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, it changed in 1992 when other countries gained relevance with 46%.
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, in 2000, the biggest change was
China
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in China
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, it changed from 20% to 30%

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