People from cities go to universities more often than those who live in the country. Some people think that the government should make it easier to enter universities for people who live outside of cities and towns by setting lower entry requirements and tuition fees. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, more people are entering higher education than ever, yet not all have equal access to it. Someone with a rural background has a lower chance of studying at

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than their peer living in the city. I fully agree that the government should aim to eliminate

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disparity. The

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reason for lower

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attendance among rural applicants is the quality of secondary education. Children living in less populated

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have a more limited choice of schools.

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, they are more likely to achieve lower grades in the final school exams, which may affect the outcome of their

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applications. If their entry requirements were set lower than for children from the cities, these young people would have a better chance of being admitted to

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. Even when the entry requirements are met,

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from more remote rural

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may find it harder to afford their studies. Indeed, a household income outside of the cities tends to be significantly lower, while

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are the same for everyone. Without any doubt, the government should set lower

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for

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from lower-income rural

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. Some people may claim that more favourable conditions for rural

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would be unfair to city

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. After all, they may have to pay even higher

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to cover the discounts received by others. Some of them may not

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a place at

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at all, while other

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with lower grades get offers simply because of their address.

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these are valid concerns, I think that the advantages of positive discrimination for

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from rural

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are more significant for society than the potential drawbacks. To conclude, the

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admissions system puts

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with

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background

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at a disadvantage. I,

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, agree that the government should introduce lower entry requirements and

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for applicants from the country,

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giving them an equal chance to study at

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.