In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

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Adverts for beer, wine and spirits are now banned in many nations.
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essay agrees with
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idea because drinking can lead to serious health problems and advertisers can often influence people to drink more than they should. Advertising alcoholic drinks should be banned because alcohol is harmful to a person’s health. Drinking too
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causes several conditions including liver cancer, diabetes and brain damage.
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huge strain on the health service and not only causes suffering to the patients but
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to their families.
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, Russia had a huge problem with alcoholism and many men were dying from alcohol-related diseases, but after they decided to stop companies promoting alcoholic beverages on TV and in print ads, it resulted in a huge reduction of
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cases. Another reason why the promotion of alcohol should be prohibited is the fact that it influences people unfairly to buy that product. The main goal of any advertising campaign is to sell more and
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could be seen as irresponsible considering the harm drinking can do. Commercials often make certain drink brands look cool or sexy, in order to sway potential customers, and don’t actually talk about the dangers.
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, Hennessy adverts often portray attractive men and women in a luxury setting, drinking cognac with a beautiful woman. In conclusion, alcohol is a hazardous product and advertisers should not be allowed to try and convince people to drink it and I,
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, believe that more countries should ban the advertising of liquor.
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