The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the process of consumption of coal to create electricity.

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, the production method of coal consists of 9 stages, the liner process, the use of coal as raw material, there some significant machines involved like a crusher, cooling cleaning and

gas

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power plant,

additionally

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there are some waste elements during

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operation

such

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as waste heat. First of all, the

coals

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collected and put in a crusher machine to produce small pieces of

coals

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then

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gathering these pieces in a large vehicle to transport them to the gasifier

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stage mainly uses

gas

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to produce the product to is suitable for the next step which is cooling.

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, the cooling process provides a cool temperature for the

coals

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and removes heat after that we go to a cleaning device which cleans the

coals

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from any other substances

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then

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and then

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reach

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reaches

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the final stage in a

gas

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power plant machine that

create

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creates

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electrical waves by using

gas

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and

eliminate

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eliminates

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heat.