The graph below shows the number of the shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The line graph indicates the record of shops'

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and

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in one country from 2011 to 2018. The most significant data of the graph is the

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of closed shops in 2015, which is the lowest point of the graph.

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during the time period, there are several matching numbers, mostly the

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of

closures

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outweighs the

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of

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. In 2011,

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were at the peak point among all of the recorded years, by around 8500,

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the closure amount was approximately 6300. In

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late 2011, a turnover happened, and in 2012 the recorded data of

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passed the

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of

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, at that moment

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reached just below

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4000 and

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was

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6000. In the next years,

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gradually increased,

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the

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of

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was fluctuating

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. In the early months of 2014, another crossing occurred,

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closures

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reached the lowest point in 2015 by around 800,

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openings

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mitigates until 2015. Followingly, in 2016,

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skyrocketed to almost 5200,

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openings

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plateaued. 2016 and 2017 were steady for both

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and

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.

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of the data,

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reduced

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to 3000,

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,

closures

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were approximately 5100 in 2016.