IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar chart compares how many US
households
Use synonyms
 who by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is obvious that the
number
Use synonyms
 of US
households
Use synonyms
 in 2015 had the highest salaries earning $100,000 or more in
three
Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
.
By contrast
Linking Words
, the
number
Use synonyms
 of US
households
Use synonyms
 in 2011 hit the "lowest money" earning $75,000-$99,999. The families in the US had the same quite high trend between less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 in
three
Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
. It can be seen that the
number
Use synonyms
 of US families incomed less than $25,000
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
about 25
million
Use synonyms
 to 29
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
 from 2007, 2011 and 2015. The
number
Use synonyms
 of US
households
Use synonyms
 that earned $25,000-$49,999 in
three
Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
 was nearly 26
million
Use synonyms
, 29
million
Use synonyms
,
28
Correct word choice
and 28
show examples
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
.
Besides
Linking Words
, the
number
Use synonyms
 of US families who had money between $50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,999 were the lowest periods in
three
Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
. The figure of
households
Use synonyms
 incomed $50,000-$74,999 was unchanged around 14
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
 in 2007, 2010 and 2015.
However
Linking Words
, US household's salaries
$
Change preposition
of $
show examples
75,000-$99,999 had a small fluctuation from 13 to 15
million
Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words households, number, three, years, million, people with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • households
  • income distribution
  • peak
  • rise
  • fall
  • stable
  • significant
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
What to do next:
Look at other essays: