The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004

The given chart presents the plantain cost in four developed countries, namely

Japan

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, France, Germany and America over a decade from 1994 to 2004.

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, what stands out from the graph is that France and Germany experienced a fall

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Japan

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and USA saw an increase over the given period,

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,

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is dominant

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of the provided time.

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, USA is the smaller than other nations being granted in the line graph. Take a closer look at

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, there was

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considerable growth from nearly 2 to 2.5 between 1994 and 2004 but its peak point was just below 3 in the year 1995.

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, it declined to above 1.5 in 2001.

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, there was a mild fluctuation in

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from 2000 to 2002,

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, the figure saw

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growth over the next 2 years between 2002 and 2004. If we look at the USA, it had a slight increase over the given period. It reached its highest point in 1995

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1.25. After some fluctuations, the figure decreased to nearly 1.10 in 1999 and it remained stable over the period. Regarding

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France, it dipped by nearly 0.75 from 1.75 to just above 1. The figure fluctuated over 7 years from 1997 to 2004. When it comes to Germany, the price of the banana kilos reduced slightly from 1.40 to 1.10. it fluctuated from 1994 to 2002,

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it remained stable.