The bar chart shows type of media to get daily news, by age group 2011.

The bar chart shows type of media to get daily news, by age group 2011.
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The diagram below dedicates methods to get information by using media in 2011. The chart divides research
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into four age
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such
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as 10-17, 18-29, 30-49, 50-64, and 65 plus.
Overall
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, radio played a significant role in society with the highest total percentage in 2011.
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, people
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this
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year
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were not interested in microblogging which was the lowest percentage in the columns.
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, social networking was the most dramatic fluctuation over age
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. As can be seen from the chart, the scale of social networking flattened out at 80% in 10-17 and 18-
29
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29-year-olds
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year
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olds.
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, it declined rapidly over middle-aged
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to the elderly around 25% for each group. Radio was unpopular with 40
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of people in 10-
17
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17-year-olds
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year
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olds;
nevertheless
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, it was the most famous media with a steady percentage around 82% to 92% in the rest
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.
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, the scale of microblogging just remained stable at around 20%-25% in 10-29
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year olds
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, and it decreased gradually by 5% for each following age group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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