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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The maps illustrate Central
Library
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 20 years ago and adjustments made in the present day.
Overall
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, it is evident that Central
Library
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 has gone through major changes in most of the areas, with
transition
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 of the several rooms’ functionality and the adoption of modern facilities. In the past, there was a
room
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,
consists
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 of children’s
books
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, in the right corner of the
library
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 farthest from the entrance door. At present,
this
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room
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 is utilized as a lecture
room
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. Moving to the middle right of the
library
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, there was previously an adult non-fiction
books
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area
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, which is currently transformed into three main functions (adult fiction
books
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, information desk, and self-service machines). In the bottom right corner of the
library
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, there was previously an enquiry desk (for ticket purchases and book returns), which is now accompanied by a cafe. Chairs and tables, which were previously located in the middle of the
library
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,
has
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 now been removed. In the top left corner of the
library
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, there was a
room
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 for CDs, videos, and computer games.
This
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room
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 has now functioned as a place for storytelling place and an
area
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 for children’s fiction
books
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, with two additional sofas inside the
room
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. Adult fiction
books
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, which were located in the middle left 20 years ago,
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 now become an
area
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 for all reference
books
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. Slightly to the bottom left, an
area
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 has now been utilized as a computer
room
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, which was previously used as a reading
room
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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