The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the spending habits of citizens in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The charts illustrate the percentage of British citizen's expenditure on various items in 1971 and 2001.
Overall
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, people's spending habits have changed over the 30-year period,
although
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food and cars top the list in both years. In 1971, nearly half of the UK's expenditure went to food (44%) items, making it the most preferred method of spending, which is followed by cars at 22% of their expenses. Other means,
such
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as petrol, restaurants, furniture, computers, and books each accounted for 10% and less of their spending, with computers being the least category spent on at just 2% of total spending. By 2001, about 43% of the British population allocated their expense to cars, which doubled compared to 3 decades ago.
In contrast
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, there was a dramatic drop in food preferences, with only 14% of the UK's expenses, compared to 1971, which makes it the same as money spent on restaurants. Activities
such
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as petrol, furniture, and books, remained relatively similar to 30 years ago.
However
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, computers increased by tenfold,
while
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books fell to just 1% in 1971.

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