The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
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The bar chart compares the
figure
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figures
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of
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for
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trips made by
yougsters
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young people
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5-12 age in one country between 1990 and 2010
and use
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using
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the
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apply
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three different
of
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apply
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vehicle
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vehicles
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.
Overall
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, it is readily that walking was the highest
trips
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number of trips
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, but it
are
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was
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replaced by car
passenger
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passengers
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and
also
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was the lowest at the beginning of the year.
To begin
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with, car
passenger
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passengers
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ranked the
least
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lowest
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with just over 4
million
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in 1990.
Then
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it rose significantly to approximately 11
million
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in 2010,
while
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walking was the highest in 1990, but
this
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figure declined considerably to 6
millions
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million
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in 2010.
On the other hand
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, cycling and walking and bus
was
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were
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the
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apply
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similiar
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similar
number
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numbers
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in 1990. After that, it had a marked fall to 2
million
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and about 3
million
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, respectively, in 2010.
In contrast
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,
bus
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the bus
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had the largest number of trips and ranked with approximately 7
million
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in 1990. Following
of
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apply
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that,
this
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number decreased
moderatly
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moderately
to about 5
million
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in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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