The map below describes changes to a park in 1980 and now. Beka

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adjustments to a

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modernisation between 1980 and now.

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for families and small quantity , became a large city

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. It has developed into more spacious, various for walks and spending time. it was a very good project to improve the

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because the

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is an important part of city life. First of all ,

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see the road changes. The road was converted into a kind of crossroads.

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crossroads gives people more opportunity to walk around the entire

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. The place where the trees were planted became a picnic spot. More benches were built on the left side of the

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next to the Pond

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so that more people

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see the beautiful view.

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flowers were cut down and replaced

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a bush ,

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on the left side of the

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side of the

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converted into a playground , for the

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come to the

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with their children.