The table shows the number of people who took part in a national health survey between 2005 and 2009, answering questions about their sleeping habits. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of people who took part in a national health survey between 2005 and 2009, answering questions about their sleeping habits. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts
number
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a number
the number
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of
women
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and
men
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who join a survey about their sleeping habits over a period of five years. It is clear from the table that
women
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were more
people
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than
men
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join to
this
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survey from 2005 to 2009. Only
2006
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in 2006
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,
men
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participated
people
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more than
women
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.
On the other hand
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, more and more
people
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joined
this
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survey In 2005, 8000
people
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join
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the investigation about their sleeping habits, but only 2000 were
men
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, the other 6000 were
women
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. Next year
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to 48000
people
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,
men
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were 36000
people
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overtook
women
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were only 12000
people
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. In 2008,
women
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rose sharply to 331000
people
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, but
men
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were 31000
people
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. The table saw a
rise
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trend,
people
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in 2007 were 64000,
however
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,
people
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increase
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dramatically about 362000
was
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were
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women
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and
men
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, and next year grew from 362000 to 540000. Especially 2007 and 2009, these two years were the same number of
people
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each
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for each
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gender, one was 32000 and another was 270000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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