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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The table gives information about the statistics of
European
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people
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 (British, German, Italian, Polish, and Spanish) living in each other's
countries
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 in 2011.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Germany had the highest number of
people
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 from
neighboring
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European
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 regions, followed by Britain and Spain. Meanwhile, the
countries
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 with the lowest proportion of
European
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 individuals were Italy and Poland
in particular
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. In terms of nationality, Polish
people
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 accounted for the highest number of migrations,
whereas
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 the Spanish were the lowest. Polish
people
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 dominated the four
European
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 regions with a total of 1.168.000, 550.000 resided in Britain,
while
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 a large proportion of Italians, at 556.000, lived in Germany. Meanwhile, British and German nationals had almost the same total populations across four
countries
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 in Europe, 524.760 and 539.000, respectively. In terms of the
countries
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, it can be observed that the proportion of
people
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 who moved and lived
to
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 Poland was the lowest, 170 were from Spain,being the lowest, and 4.400 from Germany ,as the highest

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Vocabulary: Replace the words european, people, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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