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The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relev

The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relev
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The given diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of
noodles
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 manufacturing.
Overall
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, instant
noodles
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 are produced through 8 stages which start with the transportation from storage silos and end with the labelling and sealing. In the first stage
on
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 making
noodles
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, flour gets taken from storage silos via a special truck. After that some materials, particularly water and oil are added to the flour and put in the mixer. The texture comes on the rollers which proceed
it
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into dough sheets.
Then
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 dough sheets turn into dough strips from which noodle
dics
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discs
 are made. The second stage depicts how
noodles
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 are prepared: they get cooked in the oil,
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then
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and then
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 they are given some time for drying.
Thereafter
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 drying,
noodles
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 are filled into the cups where they get mixed with various vegetables and spices. The next and
the
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final stage of manufacturing instant
noodles
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 is the labelling and sealing of the
noodles
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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