The chart below shows information about fuel used in the transport sector in different countries in Europe, compared to the EU average, in 2009 and 2010.

The chart below shows information about fuel used in the transport sector in different countries in Europe, compared to the EU average, in 2009 and 2010.
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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of
fuel
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used in different nations in Europe and the average of the EU, between 2009 and 2010.
Overall
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,
Slovakia
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, Spain and the EU both recorded a downward trend,
whereas
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Italy, France and Greece saw the opposite, and
fuel
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utility in Austria remained stable during the period.
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,
Slovakia
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consumed the most
fuel
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in both years,
while
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Greece was always the least. Regarding nations with fallen rates,
Slovakia
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ranked first with nearly 9% in 2009, which
then
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sharply reduced to over 6% next year. Similar but at a considerably lower proportion, Spain gained approximately 4% in the beginning, and
then
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slightly fell to 3% in 2010. As for countries with an upward trend, the highest
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utility belongs to Italy, which started at about under 5% in the first year and
then
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increased to approximately 5,5%
at the end
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of the period. France has a slightly
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higher consumption
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rate than Italy, with nearly 4% in 2008 and climbed to over 5%,
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Greece started at
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the
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lowest percentage, from 1% to 2% and Austria stabilized at under 6% during the period.
In contrast
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, the EU average was only lower than
Slovakia
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in both years,
whereas
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it was overtaken by Italy and Austria in 2010.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, slovakia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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