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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. Give detail of the course you took at the University. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear Sam, Hope
this
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 letter finds you well. I am writing in response to your letter received yesterday and asking for my advice about studying the same subject as that of me.
Firstly
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, I will share the details of the course that I did
last
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 year. I was admitted to the 1-year diploma programme in machine learning at Washington
University
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This
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 course was very advantageous as it helped me to gain advanced learning of machines in a very short duration of time .
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, I would like to suggest going to the same
university
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 as me as it is the only
university
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 which offers short-duration courses.
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, teachers at
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university
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 are very knowledgeable and helpful to their students. Sam, I am more thing , if you are planning to take admission in the current year
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 I will tell you to rush to the administrative office as soon as possible and fill up the admission form as they don’t accept online applications. All the best for the admission process. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best Regards, Payal Khandelwal

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that you have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Consider explicitly stating your main recommendation as the first sentence in your introduction.
coherence cohesion
Try to maintain a logical flow of ideas. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea, and transitions between them could be smoother.
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Make sure to proofread for minor errors and maintain a formal tone throughout. Avoid phrases like 'that of me,' which could be rephrased for clarity.
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Good use of a personal touch in the letter, making it feel friendly and engaging.
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Included specific details about the course which adds value to your recommendation.
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