The bar chart provides data on the number of biths given per woman in 6 Gulf countries in 2 seperate years 1990 and 2000.

The bar chart provides data on the number of biths given per woman in 6 Gulf countries in 2 seperate years 1990 and 2000.
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The bar chart illustrates the fertility rates in six Gulf
countries
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for the years 1990 and 2000.
This
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data shows how many births per woman in these
countries
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.
Firstly
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, the
countries
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with the most children born are Oman and S. Arabia with nearly 7 in 1990, but they a
slightly
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decrease in 2000 with 5.5.
However
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, Bahrain and Kuwait had the same rate in 1990 (5,5),
instead
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in 2000, Kuwait did not have the same dramatic decrease as Bahrain, with a loss of only 1 point per cent.
Then
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, the UAE and Qatar had a solid fertility rate during 1990.
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, in 2000, they had as other
countries
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a
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decrease, with a loss of 1.5 per cent for both nations.
To sum up
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, all the regions took
in
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consideration had children born very high in 1990 and during 20 years they lost nearly one per cent of the fertility rate.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • fertility rate
  • Gulf countries
  • economic development
  • social policies
  • healthcare improvements
  • population growth
  • decade
  • significant change
  • trend analysis
  • implications
  • variation
  • consistency
  • population dynamics
  • demographic changes
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