The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (KLL)

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (KLL)
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (KLL)
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The diagram below demonstrates what Anthropology graduates from one institution did after ending their
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degree period. The chart indicates the
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wages of the anthropologists in
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after five years.
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, there are a lot of options to work for
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certain time. Many workers in the diagram consist of full-time
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. There is
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, the schedule of salaries which represents the breakdown of each
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wages.
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with, full-time workers have superiority by 52% over others,
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the minimum indicator is part-time and postgrad study
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by 5%. Based on these
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, there is a point that after graduating, it
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to find full-time
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compared to the other types of jobs.
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, if there is a comparison
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the maximum salary for all
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three types of employment which are demonstrated in the graph, it is handy to notice that the government sector, the freelance consultants,
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private companies offer 50%, 40%, 30% to their
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as the maximum wages, respectively.

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