In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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day and age, new inventions
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as the
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car
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have been impacting
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our
reallities
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realities
.
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, if we think
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our
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as
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a society
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it is not a surprise that different
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kind
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kinds
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of
cars
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could be driverless and passengers will be the only humans inside the
car
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.
This
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could have a lot of advantages
such
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as more
time
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for
people
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and a decrease in the number of accidents.
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, nation leaders must know about it because
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idea will
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the number of
people
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without a job. On the one hand, we can
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two advantages
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these robot
cars
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.
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, in the
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future
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the percentage of
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accidents would decrease because every single
car
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could have an entire GPS system or artificial intelligence to keep their passengers
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.
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, the transport will move through cities without a problem because all the other
cars
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could have a
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of radar to avoid
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it.
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, in
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new society,
people
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will have more
time
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to do other things like sleep, read or watch
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, a lot of Chilean
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say that they do not have
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to read a book, eventually, if drivers use
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time
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to make changes in their lifestyle,
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as
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a book, that could be fantastic.
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, one of the
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disadvantages
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of
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this
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idea could be the number of
people
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without a job. In the
future
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,
jobs
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such
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as
taxidrivers
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taxi drivers
taxi-drivers
or deliveries could
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disappear
because society will not need
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this
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these kinds
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kind
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of
jobs
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anymore and
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could be a huge problem. A good example
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this
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is the next situation, in Chile one of the most popular
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is truck drivers because we have a lot of minerals, fruits and vegetables to export. Without
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these
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jobs
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jobs,
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the nation could across a very problematic economic situation.
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, these drives could develop new skills to find another
kind
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of
hobs
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jobs
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like technics, monitors or in security
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the government need to afford
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. In conclusion, in the
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future
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all the
cars
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could
be drive
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be driven
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for
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by
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robots or artificial intelligence.
This
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could be a great idea, but governments and nations have the responsibility to
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ensure
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that all
people
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can have a job.

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Coherence and Cohesion
The introduction could be clearer by directly stating your opinion on whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. This sets a clearer expectation for the reader.
Coherence and Cohesion
In your paragraphs, ensure that each point flows smoothly to the next. Transition phrases or sentences would enhance the logical flow.
Task Achievement
Support each point with more specific examples or data, especially regarding the impact on jobs and the advancement of technology in driving.
Task Achievement
Proofread for small grammatical errors and typos (e.g., 'dissapear' should be 'disappear'; 'taxidrivers' should be 'taxi drivers', 'reallities' should be 'realities'). This will help in achieving greater clarity.
Task Achievement
You effectively identified both advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles, addressing the prompt comprehensively.
Task Achievement
Your essay includes relevant examples, especially in discussing the potential impact on employment, which is a significant point.

Your opinion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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