Your neighbours have recently written to you to you about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours, in your letter: - explain a reason for the noise - apologise - describe what actions will you take

Dear Mr. Bhangu I am writing

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letter to apologize for the sound that has been coming from my house lately.

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is the same noise that you mentioned in your recent letter; I have been meaning to talk to you since. Thanks to your letter, it came to my notice and realised that the sound was coming from the ducts of the air vents. There was a bird stuck in one of the ducts who trying to escape but couldn't do it on its own. And it was the result of those attempts that the sound echoed all around the house making it unpleasant for the ears. But now the situation is under control as I rescued the bird.

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, I have scheduled an appointment with the duct cleaning company

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, if there is anything else

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blocking the ducts will be cleared. They will be coming tomorrow around 10 in the morning.

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, I assure you that there will not be any more casualties in the future. Hope you will accept my apology and I am really sorry for the inconvenience. Yours sincerely, Jasmeen

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formatting

The letter has a clear structure with a proper greeting and closing, which enhances its overall presentation.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

191 words

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noise
inconvenience
apologize
understanding
renovations
family gatherings
celebrations
sincerely
concern
actions
reduce
soundproofing
measures
respect
consideration
acknowledge

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