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Writing Samples
Band 4

You have planned to study in Australia. You have sent a letter to a college, but you have not received a reply from the college. Write a letter to the college principal. In your letter You should give details of the course that you wished to do Say why do you choose to study at the college Say why you need the reply soon.

Dear Sir, I am Zenith Patel from
Indian
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. I am writing
this
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 letter to inquire about the "Computer Programming course" which is offered
in
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at
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 your institution. I wrote a letter
couple
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a couple
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 of days ago, but unfortunately, did not get any reply. I wish to do
"Computer
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a "Computer
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 Programming course" in your college because
teacher
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 are
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the worlds
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worlds
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 best here.

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to include a proper introduction and closing remarks for better structure.
task achievement
Provide more details about why you chose this college and why you need a response quickly.
task achievement
You have clearly stated the course you are interested in.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter starts with a polite greeting, which is good for formal correspondence.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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