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The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts depict information regarding shopping
sales
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 for a retail
sector
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 in Canada in a
year
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 2005 and 2010. After analysing both the charts, it is clearly seen that there is differences of 5% in the online shopping
sales
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 for electronics and appliances
sector
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 the
sales
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 reduced in
year
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 2010.
next,
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in
year
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 2005, to 22% of the
sales
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 were in food and Beverage
sector
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, gradually increased by 10% after the period of 5 years, which was the highest
sales
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 recorded that
year
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.
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, home furnishing
sales
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 had a decline of 5%, with 20% sale in 2005 and only the
sales
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 of 15% in
year
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 2010, being the lowest retailing
sector
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 in given
year
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.
moreover
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, video games
sector
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 contributed by 18% * 2005 increased their
sales
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 by sharing around a one fourth of the
overall
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 shopping
sales
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.
Overall
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, electronics and appliance had highest shopping
sales
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 in
year
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 2005, which was
then
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 over taken by the retailing
sector
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 of a food and beverages, in
year
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 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, sector, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accounted for
  • notable decrease
  • significant increase
  • steady growth
  • modest increase
  • sharp decline
  • percentage of online sales
  • retail sectors
  • pie charts
  • comparison
  • over the five-year period
  • largest share
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