The gouverment should encourage people to live ourskirts of a city. Do you agree or disagree?

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and housing challenges are growing around the world, and

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, it is sometimes argued that government and

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ought to encourage/motivate/provide incentives for companies to move/relocate from urban areas to the outskirts of the cities.

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decision has a number of undeniable benefits, I believe, they are both outweighed and outnumbered by the drawbacks.

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phenomenon followed by my personal point of view. On the one hand, moving the companies to the countryside has a number of potential benefits; chief among them, a healthier and more efficient society owing to the fact that

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would lead to a dramatic decrease in the amount of

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inside the cities resulting in fewer diseases and healthier people.

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, there would be a significant rise in the health and productivity level in the society as a whole. More importantly, the city of Toronto serves as a good example where the government has tried

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approach over the past decades resulting in a 25% decrease in

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and

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levels in the city. Based on government reports

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business productivity has increased by 20%.

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businesses to the outskirts has numerous undeniable drawbacks; the most important of which is, a tremendous negative impact on the environment

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pollution

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and

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to the suburbs causing a drastic rise in

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and congestion levels there.

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, there will be enormous adverse repercussions on the environment.

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has been evidenced by several studies the latest of which is one conducted by the University of Toronto concluding that encouraging

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businesses to leave the city over the past half a century has led to a 30% increase in the amount of

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in the areas surrounding Toronto. The study

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found that

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trend has increased the number of respiratory diseases

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as lung cancer and asthma in the suburbs by 25%. In conclusion,

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relocating businesses outside the urban areas has several unquestionable merits

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as less road congestion and

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to a healthier society, it is undoubtedly eclipsed by the demerits including the tremendous increase in environmental damage and health issues in the suburbs.