Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The map depicts the development of Chorleywood Village in London between 1868 and 1994. The map
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presents the addition of communities in response to the population demand.
Overall
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, the first
settlement
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began near the west of the current Chorleywoof Park and Golf Course and spread out in all directions. Meanwhile, the initial connecting road began on the west and north of the community which
then
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evolved into railways.
Initially
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, the village started as a single
settlement
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close to the northwest of the current Charleywood Train Station. From 1883 to 1922,
this
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community
then
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spread to the south surrounding the railway stop.
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, in the next 48 years, the Chorleywood inhabitants converted the land on both the east and west of their current suburb.
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, from 1970 to 1994, most residents occupied an area located at the northeast and east of their present residential zones.
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, the rising population of Charleywood demanded accessible roads and modes of transportation. These roads were strategically placed beside the first
settlement
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and the northern side of the latter developed areas. Meanwhile, in 1909, a railway was built spanning the length of the southern communities, where the railway station was
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erected.
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,
along with
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the recently established communities, the motorway was built in 1970 that transverses from north to south of the
last
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built
settlement
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words settlement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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