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The graph below shows radio and television audience throughout the day in 1992

The graph below shows radio and television audience throughout the day in 1992
The provided figure illustrates the variation of people in the United Kingdom over four years who used television and
radio
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 as a way of entertainment between October 1992 and December 1992.
Overall
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, it's clearly evidence that the television is preferred in the evening at 8 PM and
radio
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 listeners like to listen at the same time but in the morning at 8 AM.
According to
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 what is shown in the chart TV set viewership is 0% at six in the morning, it sees upward and downward till 2 PM when it's almost 20%, and it increases dramatically hitting a peak at about 50% in the evening at 8. As time passes the television audience keeps declining from 50% to 5% at night at 2 AM.
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, the figures for
radio
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 listeners are less than 10% at six in the morning. A step raise is observed.
however
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, the percentage of using the
radio
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 has a moderator decline from 30% to 5% at 2 AM.

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