The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides key information about the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary
School
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since its construction in 1950.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that in 1950, if you came from the east side and crossed the main road there was a
school
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on your left side. After that, there were houses. Next to houses, there was farmland beside a large area called a playground.
According to
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what is shown in 1980, there were many changes, as what we saw there was a car park replaced houses.
Moreover
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, add a building next to the
school
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's main building.
Furthermore
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, there was a new space named a sports field
instead
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of farmland. In terms of 2010, there was a large extension for a car park.
Furthermore
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, the sports field was smaller than the area in 1980. There were not any changes in the
school
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's main building and science block.
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, the playground reminds me of the same place but has a smaller space than before.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • changes
  • construction
  • layout
  • expansions
  • renovations
  • facilities
  • capacity
  • resources
  • educational priorities
  • student population
  • community needs
  • descriptive
  • overview
  • comparison
  • significant
  • timeline
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