The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gyms once a month or more between 1990 and 2010.
The line chart depicts details about European citizens of various
age
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groups who
visit
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visited
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to
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gyms once a month or more from 1990 to 2010. After analyzing the line chart it can be seen clearly that a small number of
people
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used to visit
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gym
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the gym
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in the
year
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1990.
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,
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people
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the people
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of
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aged
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age
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25 to 34 gradually increased to 20
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while
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,
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apply
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citizen
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citizens
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of other
age
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group
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groups
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remain
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remained
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same
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the same
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as
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the pervious
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pervious
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previous
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year
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. In the
year
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1998, 29
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percent
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per cent
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people
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of
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age
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aged
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18 to 24 went to
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gym
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the gym
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and it rose steadily up to 60
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percent
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per cent
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in 2006. After that it
reamin
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remained
same
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the same
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in 2010.
Furthermore
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,
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the line
chart shows that in the
year
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1998
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1998,
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only 10
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percent
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per cent
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ofpeople
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of people
of middle
age
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35 to 44 went to
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gym
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the gym
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but
in
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at
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the end of the
year
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2010, the ratio reached
uo
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up
to 40
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percent
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per cent
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. Citizen of
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age
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the age
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group 45 and above who visited the
gym
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was between 10 to 20
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percent
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per cent
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only during the whole period.
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, the highest proportion of
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age
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the age
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gruop
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group
groups
who visited the
gym
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was 25 to 34.
However
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,
people
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of
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aged
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age
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45 and over have the lowest numbers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, people, gym, year, percent with synonyms.
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