THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCTS OF FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN 2005 AND 2010

The bar graph displays information about the gross domestic products in the USA,

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, Japan and Germany in two different

years

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2005 and 2010.

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, all four countries increased their

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while

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America had a

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many times greater than any other country in both

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. The other significant feature of

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graph is that

China

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nearly tripled its

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in just 5

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. In 2005, the USA's gross domestic product

value

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by far was the highest among the other countries with over 12,000

USD

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. Japan's is the second highest in GPD

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with just over 4,000

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. Germany remained relatively stable between 2,000 and 4,000

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in both

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however

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China

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GDP

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price was the lowest among them. In 2010, the United States

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rose to reach its peak with over 14,000 US dollars.

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China

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value

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tripled to

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just below 8,000

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, making it the

second highest

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country compared to 2005. Japan and Germany increased by almost 1000 and 500

USD

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respectively.

anody32

Jun 8, 2025

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THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE GROSS DOMESTIC PRODUCTS OF FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN 2005 AND 2010

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