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The maps give information about the changes of the Southwest Airport between now and after refurbishment next year.

The maps give information about the changes of the Southwest Airport between now and after refurbishment next year.
The maps give information about the changes of the Southwest Airport between now and after refurbishment next year. Generally, the plan is to renovate the airport in the next year, the main change involves the gates with the space will be expanded to have more gates. The new layout has more facilities
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 as the bag drop, ATM and car hire. The gate
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 will be widened to make space for more gates, up to 18 doors in total, which is more than double the current, beside that the walkway will be removed to make the sky train in the
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. The map shows the new construction of shops in the north of the security passport control. There will be an expansion for the departures and arrivals. In the departures
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, the upgrade includes moving the cafe to the lower left corner, the bag drop will be set up in the old location of the check-in
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 which will be relocated to the upper right corner. The ATM will be placed in the eastern side of the arrivals
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 and one more cafe will be added next to the left of the ATM. Outside the airport, there is an
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 for car hire. 203 words

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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