Governments should spend more on railways rather than roads. to extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some states should prioritize spending on railways over roads. I completely agree with
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statement as it will lead to reduced
air
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pollution
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and fewer
accidents
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. One of the biggest reasons for
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pollution
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is the fuels that come out
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the
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cars. Fuel is the gas
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released from vehicles which
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in climate
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and destroys our environment.
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8 million people have lost their lives
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fossil fuel
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. The study reveals that
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pollution
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from fossil fuels is responsible for about 1 in 5 deaths worldwide. The second reason why I agree with
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statement is the increasing number of car
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all over the globe. Recently there
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a dramatic rise in car ownership
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of the accident rates.
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, 68% of
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citizens are involved
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car
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, some of them lost their lives
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others
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disability
injury
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injuries
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.
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there were only 15 train
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from 1998 to 2025. İn conclusion, giving priority to expenditure on railways would save our environment with less
air
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pollution
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and human lives.

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Make sure your introduction clearly states your opinion on the topic and outlines the main points you will discuss.
coherence and cohesion
Use connecting words such as 'firstly', 'secondly', and 'finally' to help your ideas flow together better.
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Try to give more examples or details to support your points, this will make your argument stronger.
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You have chosen a relevant topic and presented a clear opinion on it.
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Your examples about air pollution and accidents are relevant and impactful.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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