You paid for a one month English Language course at a college overseas but you cannot attend. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter Introduce yourself and give details of the course. Explain why you are unable to attend the course. Say what you would like to do

Dear Mr. Stanley, My name is Tomás Pablo Alcaide Santamaría, and I am writing to you regarding the English for healthcare professionals that I have recently reserved with your institution from March 15th to April 15th. Sadly, I must inform you that I will not be able to participate in the program because of an Aquiles tendon injury

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weekend.

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, I will have to undergo surgery on March 1st.

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, in the doctor's words, I should be in rehabilitation for at least four months. After my recovery, I might be able to return to my regular activities. I would like to reschedule my pathway for next term.

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, I am not sure about the administrative steps to fulfil

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diligence.

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reason, I would like to ask, if you could gently orientate me on how and where should I send my medical documents, and every other file relevant to

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topic. Looking forward to receiving a response from you. Faithfully yours. Tomás Alcaide

tom.alcaidesaSat Jun 21 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to keep a clear structure. Start with who you are and what the letter is about. Then explain your reason for not attending.

coherence and cohesion

Check for grammar and punctuation in some sentences to improve clarity.

task achievement

You could be more polite by saying 'I would greatly appreciate your guidance' instead of 'I would like to ask'.

task achievement

You explained your situation clearly and provided necessary details.

coherence and cohesion

Your closing is polite and expresses anticipation of a response, which is good.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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